A trout who swam in murky waters
surrounded there by sons and daughters,
developed on a sunny day
a toothache, causing him dismay.
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This was great Herbert! I love fishing and I'll think of that fish next time we go. :) sincerely, Mary
A wonderful humourous write Herbert, my sense of humour entirely. A great piece of poetry. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX
while chewing crab rangoon today at a chinese buffet...I suddenly began to miss the 20 year old filling that popped out a few months ago...
Your use of couplets with light humor is very effective in this piece. Puts a new twist on the standard in most fish stories: the one that got away. Tom