A Fishy Day At Bay Comments
Blue wave, white foam, washing the long shore
with its tender soothing hands, brushing away
my fading memories, polishing men's rock heart, at bay
-akin to the pebbles, the bubbly kids search to store
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Strange piece here. I like it. The style, creativity and flow works. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful poem. Puts me on sea for a morning walk. Loved it. congratulations.
sinking legs, wander aimlessly across the shore, holding hand sometimes alone, like two creepers intertwined, joy and sorrow guise the breaking dawn, sun rises, to the silent command of magic wand I look upon through the net, the arid faces, ripping hungry and fiery eyes.. Excellent write. Beautiful picture scape, Congrats on your win, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Shalini, Excellent write, Congrats WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Vivid imagery makes the poem come alive! However, I would have loved it still more had the rhythm of the first three stanzas been maintained in the last two. The first stanza promised much more! ! A talented poet, who can only mature with the passage of time....like goode olde wine....
There is Solitude, There is Nostalgia, There is the right mix of Subtlety and flow of life.. The initial stanza brings in certain feeling akin to that of admiring a Water Color painting... The poem travels through various stages of creative narration and creative imagination.. and the last one.. the last one blazes into reality. It was a soothing experience reading through... All the very best.
caught in men's glitters of a wonder world afar, lovely lines...10
caught in men's glitters of a wonder world afar.. lovely lines....10
travelling back alive- just a daydream... nice lines, , lovely feelong...10 The life stands as vast spread ocean It presents with blue water scene So deep yet presents with dilemma Person fails to think as if in comma
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7/26/2025 4:09:15 PM # 1.0.0
A pleasure to read. Nice