Tuesday, July 28, 2015

A Fish With A Wish Comments

Rating: 4.3

A fish had a wish
So he leapt with a twist
Straight out of the river
With a splash and a splatter.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 05 August 2015

May all those who take hasty leaps without thinking reach home safe like this fish of yours. Enjoyed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2015

Stunning expression. A captivting poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 July 2015

We humans with our limited knowledge and unlimited desires take steps but are lucky not to be in great trouble which is only the love and grace of God.Loved reading the poem.

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Pankaj Aggarwal 29 July 2015

The fish could not gauge the distance to the moon correctly. We too make efforts but often fail to realize our goals, not being able to correctly assess our course. Nice poem. keep writing

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