Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Tuesday, September 27, 2011

A Fish In The Sea Of Tears Comments

Rating: 4.1

O baby you have made me insult-proof
Though if you are a home I am your roof!
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Asif Andalib
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Excellent rhyming poem! Enjoyd readin. Do read my latest too.

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Vishal Sharma 03 July 2013

a very lovely and innocent poem

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Rishi Kaashyap 22 December 2012

Love the message it conveys... Keep Writing :)

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Roong S 28 October 2012

wow..can't imagine anyone so sweet ;)

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Sarojini Pattayat 14 October 2012

nice poem. what made you to write this poem.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

Written well with flair......khub bhalo laglo pore

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Micmac Mccrory 07 February 2012

love the title; a good write.

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Josephine Collett 07 February 2012

I just love the title of this poem! Very nice imagery.

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Batool Abdulhafid 26 January 2012

Nice! I like it though i dont wanna be a loser: P

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Sun And Moon 26 January 2012

erm, thats a nice piece of poetry :) Keep it up

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Ogbonna Solomon 17 January 2012

you are so emotional in writing.

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Lusekelo Simwela 08 January 2012

nice writing... nice imagery

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Minu Alex 06 December 2011

who is this baby u r talking much abt?

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Chanda Mwenechanya 28 November 2011

kawama ako mudala, twakatemwa. Nicely written! K33p sharing

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Ramesh T A 12 October 2011

Brief and to the point poem is interesting to read. Keep it up!

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Indira Babbellapati 11 October 2011

it has a catchy title...and living like a fish in sea of tears...i bow to ur imagination!

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Nurain Ali-balogun 01 October 2011

Great flow and connection. Nicely written.

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Unwritten Soul 29 September 2011

Sweet sea you live in, right? ? ? that's how you make this sound so nice! ...Sea so sweet in your mind, because of that you sometimes taste salty tears more...coz u used to live in sweet world..In other word, even you feel low but you keep your day high...guess you really fall in love :) _Unwritten SOul

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

a fine cut poetry with the rhythm very touching one..

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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