Wednesday, June 24, 2009

***a First True Love Comments

Rating: 2.8

You are my heart,
which will always remain with me.
I envy our sweet true love,
a love that will last through eternity.
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hari khabrani
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You are my heart, which will always remain with me. I envy our sweet true love, a love that will last through eternity. .. it is uniquae experience and true one... good write read mine.. anywhere.butterflies around and how are u? will u marry me?

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Obinna Eruchie 08 July 2009

'A FIRST TRUE LOVE' nicely written.

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~ Jon London ~ 05 July 2009

Once the soul has been touched by this love....the feeling is one that truly blesses life for eternity.............wonderful piece of loves share 10++

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

am hoping that this first true love is the last true love too...your poem is so beautiful..grace

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Catrina Heart 24 June 2009

First true love....well being in nostalgia for quite a while... It gave shivers to my spine, a tinge of sweet honey dews in the heart....lovely poem in vividness! 10+++

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Ency Bearis 24 June 2009

unforgetable one.. first love..ah, so nice to get back on, on, on...nice write, so passionate....great piece....10

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Naidz Ladia 24 June 2009

my gosh....i like this one...speechless for this..mmmmmmmmm..mmmmmmm..mmmmmmmmmm...mmmmm...since this is very nice, , this will go to my fav..naizz wait...i'll read this again..becoz its really a nice one...very nice, promise...

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Priyanka Bhowmick 24 June 2009

first love... a memory 4ever.. well penned..

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