Reckoning love I obtain
Overflowing like fountain.
Now I feel no emptiness
Every second is happiness.
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a lovely written poem... You described a first love (guess it's yours) so nicely in a dramatic way. Love it.
thnx for the comment...life always makes sure we learn in our way...this is a beaufitul poem...nice structure...
LOVE a small word with a huge meaning, I love this poem---Melvina
every body should love more. love is the only thing that buyilds uop the world.
Your first love, will always be with U no matter what happen.....nice rite...
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