Wednesday, September 13, 2006

' A First Love ' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Reckoning love I obtain
Overflowing like fountain.
Now I feel no emptiness
Every second is happiness.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Darwin Guevarra 20 November 2013

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Anggie Servian 29 April 2008

a lovely written poem... You described a first love (guess it's yours) so nicely in a dramatic way. Love it.

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Anabel just Anabel 06 February 2008

thnx for the comment...life always makes sure we learn in our way...this is a beaufitul poem...nice structure...

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Melvina Germain 15 September 2006

LOVE a small word with a huge meaning, I love this poem---Melvina

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John Tiong Chunghoo 13 September 2006

every body should love more. love is the only thing that buyilds uop the world.

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Tracey Collins 13 September 2006

Your first love, will always be with U no matter what happen.....nice rite...

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Sridhar RVL 13 September 2006

Yes....... Love Take my 10

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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