Tuesday, November 3, 2009

A Firefly That Scatter The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

saved the mother earth, and witness the glooming
sky, as its dawning morn invites to come; calling the
humming birds laid the sweeten humid morning
midst of the trunk it’s lay
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Rachel Butler 13 November 2009

'Let it every paint color our dream of firefly in ages we live and forward that hibernation to wake our lasting beautiful light shine' Rachel Ann Butler

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Sadiqullah Khan 13 November 2009

Very touchy connecting lines, great harmony and great messege. Loved reading it.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2009

let it every paint color our dream of firefly in ages we live and forward that hibernation to wake our lasting beautiful light shine, in the dark; for tomorrow is the day to beacon our memory of today.yes we breathfor bright tomorrowwith the hope thatit may bring bright sunshine with glittering hope.lovely imagination and to watch andobserveit with cre....10 read mine .ysto to..world as family

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Estrella Baldemosa 07 November 2009

salamat sa imo pag paambit sa mga balak. happy birthday antonio.

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 November 2009

Have a purpose in life makes it meaningful. Meaningful composition.

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rago rago 03 November 2009

very nice descriptions....................

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Kesav Easwaran 03 November 2009

yes; we, the fireflies, have a purpose in lfe! Very good poem Anton...the firefly symbol is very powerful there..10.

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