Monday, December 21, 2015

A Firefly's View - Micropoetry Comments

Rating: 4.5

#Micropoetry
Wavering panes of light
Reflected on sleepy lakes face
Darkened cushion of water
...
Read full text

Seema Jayaraman
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 21 December 2015

Nice metaphors, beautiful poem.

1 0 Reply
Seema Jayaraman 24 December 2015

Thank you Khairulji, glad you were able to decipher the Metaphor. Thank you once again.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2015

Reflected on sleepy lakes face this is definitely amazing micro poetry. Very fantastically drafted and shared poem.10

2 0 Reply
Seema Jayaraman 24 December 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji. Micor poetry is the easiest to type out on mobile while commuting.. lest I forget the words by the time I reach home.

0 0
Close
Error Success