Tuesday, August 2, 2011

A Fire Within Unveiled Comments

Rating: 4.2

When all of your hope is pinned,
and the 'Preacher Within' has sinned,
don't look for the fiery love in love.
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Dylan Dowrick
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Lauren Love 24 December 2011

Great job! It does, somehow, show me the otherside of love :) Lauren the Aussie

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Ben Burger 05 September 2011

Well done, keep up the good work

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Romeo Della Valle 05 August 2011

Wow! What a very impressive, well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows that Poetry runs in your blood! I love its imagery and rhymes.10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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