Thursday, August 23, 2007

A Fire-Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sunset was like a fire-sky
That truly lit up my world
Clouds were orange and yellow
Like a paintbrush making swirls
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 10 January 2009

Lovely images you create here, Marilyn...a fire-sky...beautiful and frightening...yes...the phrase 'barely a sign of sound' goes very well with the word- frightening...the expressions ‘bodies in semi dark’ and ‘nothing quite real’ add to the vividness of the beautiful yet frightening bleeding sun set scene...marvelous write...10+

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2008

I have witnessed a few beautiful moments like that and your description is breathtaking. Great read! Loyd

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Ben Gieske 23 August 2007

Fire-sky is a good description in itself. We are not always prepared for beauty. It can be overwhelming at times.

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

One could endlessly write about the sunset, it is so mesmerizing and different every time you look. I always stand in awe looking at it. Lovely write again. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Marilyn Lott

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