Friday, October 2, 2009

# #a Finished Scenario Comments

Rating: 3.6

a finished life scenario
a book given long ago
we stick to it all along
not seeing what's going on
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 17 October 2009

An interesting observation on truth…succinctly made. Truth is indivisible and an eternal continuum.

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Vandavasu Vittal 16 October 2009

One gets to know the truth at the last part before he goes to old nick or almighty god. Thanks for sharing this poem sir.

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Patrick A. Martin 16 October 2009

To thine own self be true and that truth will set you free. -10

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Antonio Liao 16 October 2009

it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless

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Antonio Liao 16 October 2009

it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless

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Antonio Liao 16 October 2009

its the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless

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Aparna Sinha 14 October 2009

A FINISHED AND OVER TRUTH THERE NEVER WAS I hate to reiterate...but this is simply beautiful..I am not exaggerating (I always misspell, this word! pardon me! !) but the ending has similar impact as 'Grecian Urn'- by John Keats A lovely write

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Aparna Sinha 14 October 2009

A FINISHED AND OVER TRUTH THERE NEVER WAS I hate to reiterate...but this is simply beautiful..I am not exaggerating (I always misspell, this word! pardon me! !) but the ending has similar impact as 'Grecian Urn'- by John Keats A lovely write

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David Scott 14 October 2009

Excellent poetry writing. The caps on 'THE TRUTH' help hammer the message home.

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Ankur Ankur 14 October 2009

very thoughtful like it very much 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 October 2009

well written, the flow is good shan

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Nalini Hebbar 08 October 2009

truth...a bitter pill...but how many of us understand it? ...great read

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David Harris 07 October 2009

Samanyan, quite a few people and I am one of them believe that our lives are preordained from the moment of our birth to the moment when we die and are resurrected as someone or something else to learn more. Your poem expresses truth that we should all live by, our own truth. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. All the best David

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

a good insightful poem with virtues to ponder...a great piece...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2009

Great piece... sending a great message about TRUTH... its importance...its impact to our being human the truth of our existence... the book of Truth....and how we will accept it... 'each and every one..... carries with him...THE TRUTH each and every moment... carries with it...THE TRUTH' i love this verses....send a great impact...great message... ...we are the Truth of God's wisdom... thanks for sharing this, Sam 10+++++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

nothing escaped in the flare of truth even lies truns to dust in time.............Great written piece....10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

philosophies bloomed! fine phrasology! 10+

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Surya . 04 October 2009

A TRUTHFUL POEM WITH LOT OF LESSONS FOR LIFE. VOTED10 SURYA

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Louis Rams 03 October 2009

truth is life, and life is truth. and you express it very well in this writing. a ten

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Joseph Poewhit 03 October 2009

There is truth in our own realities

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