a finished life scenario
a book given long ago
we stick to it all along
not seeing what's going on
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One gets to know the truth at the last part before he goes to old nick or almighty god. Thanks for sharing this poem sir.
To thine own self be true and that truth will set you free. -10
it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless
it's the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless
its the last lines that makes the finale of everything...of all wisdom that life is but a truth to live......marvelous truth of life....a 10 ++++ God bless
A FINISHED AND OVER TRUTH THERE NEVER WAS I hate to reiterate...but this is simply beautiful..I am not exaggerating (I always misspell, this word! pardon me! !) but the ending has similar impact as 'Grecian Urn'- by John Keats A lovely write
A FINISHED AND OVER TRUTH THERE NEVER WAS I hate to reiterate...but this is simply beautiful..I am not exaggerating (I always misspell, this word! pardon me! !) but the ending has similar impact as 'Grecian Urn'- by John Keats A lovely write
Excellent poetry writing. The caps on 'THE TRUTH' help hammer the message home.
truth...a bitter pill...but how many of us understand it? ...great read
Samanyan, quite a few people and I am one of them believe that our lives are preordained from the moment of our birth to the moment when we die and are resurrected as someone or something else to learn more. Your poem expresses truth that we should all live by, our own truth. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. All the best David
a good insightful poem with virtues to ponder...a great piece...10
Great piece... sending a great message about TRUTH... its importance...its impact to our being human the truth of our existence... the book of Truth....and how we will accept it... 'each and every one..... carries with him...THE TRUTH each and every moment... carries with it...THE TRUTH' i love this verses....send a great impact...great message... ...we are the Truth of God's wisdom... thanks for sharing this, Sam 10+++++++ Lovelots, Maia
nothing escaped in the flare of truth even lies truns to dust in time.............Great written piece....10
truth is life, and life is truth. and you express it very well in this writing. a ten
An interesting observation on truth…succinctly made. Truth is indivisible and an eternal continuum.