Monday, November 12, 2007

A Fine Sunday It Turned Out To Be Comments

Rating: 3.5

She sat there in my Haines,
reading Oliver Sacks to me.
While I, not being the literal kind,
this fine morning, I stared
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Alison Cassidy 19 November 2007

Herbert, you have certainly captured an authentic Aussie flavour (of the most refined kind, I assure you) in this wonderful slice of domestic/romantic life. Love the matter-of-fact, slightly self deprecating tone and the line '...always between erection and rejection.' stood out for me. Your heart purrs through your words. love, Allie xxxx

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