What a maestro!
(What a dimwit!)
What didn't I get about my depreciation?
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Hi Cailiie - Thanks for your kind remarks on my poems. I also hope that we are not being hoodwinked by some poet fairy. I really enjoyed this poem - God do I know the feeling. It's beauty lies in it's simplicity and conversational style. Well done!
Do I hear the music of a Gigolo's Gig. When ever a woman uses the word Dimwit I know there is a sour note involved.
i love any poem that's related to music but this one's gotta be one of the best!
How well I know THIS song and dance! ! I really enjoyed the truth of this....very much!
You have a way with such a short amount of words! I give you a 10.
Its really a good poem. But I see life beyond its frontier. Try to locate the reality and truth. Life is reality and full of hazards.So that gives you pain.
You give the so-called maestro far too much credit......for we enter any new relationship with a single ally.....HOPE. My friend you are the genius....and LIFE the dimwit!
ha ha... I really enjoyed this. And haven't we all fallen for this one? Fun poem with a serious note. HG: -) xx
and the diminution in its own way still reeks diminuendo blurs at the finale, and that is the metamorphosis coming across, , , , , , , wonderfu thought by the imagery of time in space, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
I like it. I am a musician too.