' A Fine Line Comments

Respected Poetess Really i am too little to make any comment on your poem. but after all i feel a matured composition. i like to request you earnestly to read my poem and please let me know about my feelings good or bad and which one you liked most. I shall feel lucky to get your comments. some poems are in different language but most are in english with kind regards sincerely yours ramesh rai rkrai100@gmail.com

It's a very fine line and this one is full of fine lines on the issue of where to stand/what to do when things are so in the balance. And it's full of what you do so well. Herbert was here for lessons I'll bet, and appears to have been later on the scene than he thought. I remember when someone had asked about flowing rhythmic poetry in the forum and you directed them to Charlie Moore and me! ! Serious modesty. We couldn't hold a candle to you on those counts, and that's the truth. xxx

Piquant choice. Lovely poem with a steady, warm hum that was pleasing to the ear and to the heart.