A Fine Line Comments

A very nice poem about love. I enjoyed reading it. I invite you to read and comment.

'Seen through each heart is love’s knifes' Rachel Ann Butler

excellent indeed! ......10+

Life has to be a fine line, otherwise we would be all over the place. Fine write.

Well, I guess I've found another poet here. It seems like I have to read a lot of bad things to find what I'm looking for. Thank you Patricia, I think Yoonoos got it right. This is a mature piece of poetry. Frankly, it's also a bit creative. This is the kind of thing people look for when someone says, 'Poetry for sale'. A job well done, I wish I had found you sooner. Greenwolfe 1962

Superbly written and deeply touching. I'm sighing here... it rings alarm bells, from times past. Lines three and four are totally brilliant in particular, P. Hugs to you. t x

an excellent piece of yours again, Patricia!

It is a very fine line indeed, glad I do not feel it. Lovely poem well written. Bob