Do you think,
it's ok to give these commands?
Do you think,
it's acceptable to make,
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Wow! this is beautiful! the sequence just seems to flow, its real good. forgiving is hard to do, but it can be done! ! ! all the best!
forgiveness mends all broken hearts makes a whole of many parts love returns to ease the pain and a mother's smile returns again
Hi Emma! Very powerful wards, nicely arranged to describe your fillings.I like it a lot.Maybe your next poem will be about forgiveness. All the best.
Hard and powerfull.. here's the message and deal with it! the kind of poem I love..