Wednesday, February 25, 2009

A Final Goodbye Comments

Rating: 2.7

Do you think,
it's ok to give these commands?
Do you think,
it's acceptable to make,
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Emma Jane Rae
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Rick Adriolo 06 February 2012

Hard and powerfull.. here's the message and deal with it! the kind of poem I love..

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Nangula Immanuel 04 April 2009

Wow! this is beautiful! the sequence just seems to flow, its real good. forgiving is hard to do, but it can be done! ! ! all the best!

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Wojja Fink 07 March 2009

forgiveness mends all broken hearts makes a whole of many parts love returns to ease the pain and a mother's smile returns again

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Milica Franchi De Luri 25 February 2009

Hi Emma! Very powerful wards, nicely arranged to describe your fillings.I like it a lot.Maybe your next poem will be about forgiveness. All the best.

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