A Fight Well Fought Is Not Always Won Comments

Sanity is a country I dont have a visa for, I really good write, with several lines that ring home to me. Regards

There is a sense of humor in this little poem that shines through. Keep writing!

Fear of the unknown, fear of becoming and yet before us it all lays and beyond our deeper ken and contrived interferece, will be what it will be. Poetry is the great therapy, if there is madness there is energy and an often contrary or different view from the supposedly sane world. Continue to write, take a stand, listen to the news, get passionate, get angry, give both literary barrels and contribute to the world and you will soon realize your brand of crazy is essential to bring clarity and another voice in a far crazier world.

This poem really captures the emotion of a writer stuck in a very terrible rut - one that hits me VERY colostomy to home. The description of your state ring of honesty, and it takes the poem to a new level. In other words, I loved it! ^.^