I have looked into history,
and seen a field.
It's a field where, no wheat will yield.
It's a field that saw a bloody war.
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Wonderful write Sylvia, a lovely read, albiet sad, but very well constructed. Love Ernestine XXX
Thanks so much for your recent review, and this poem, a field that saw a war is totally awesome, I especially liked how you mentioned the 23rd psalm! God bless you, Love Janne*
Sylvia have you read my 'Dark Mantle Of Death 1917'.The occasion depicted there could have taken place in that very field about which you so skillfully wrote. Best regards, Sid John.
A poem with great imagery! A very good work of poetry.Excellent in writing and talent.My ballcap goes off to you. I'd have to give this a rating of fifteen, with ten being the highest. Well done and keep up the good work. God bless. With warm regards-Mike Gale.
Such deep peace after such darkness, you have given the reader calm with your words.This poem reminds me of the song called 'Brothers In Arms 'by Dia Straights and amazing piece of heartfelt poetry and song.Love Duncan
My god sylvia...such a beautiful tribute to such a horrible event. You must have spent some time there...Bruce
Excellent, Sylvie. I truly enjoyed it. Not a word too many. Best Herbert
An excellent tribute to the war to end all wars (well, one of them) . Very well versed. I like the way it appears to show that even after such darkness peace and beauty can still rise from the ashes. Nicely written