A Field Of Sadness Comments

Poignant and wistful. Artfully rendered with an air of haunting, painful mystery. Well done, good colleague.

I like the mood setting of your poem that sound consistant and so expressive...along with that nice photo, it blends well...A field of sadness, i hope you will be harvesting happiness again soon, we all in cycle of happy-sad-joy, gloomy-etc...i know its hard to always be strong...be if we could find reason to be one, use it....so we will never destroyed by its ugliness, instead to claim its other side, beauty! lets try...

A field of sadness.............. Filled with beauty. Razed to the ground, yet trying its damnest to regenerate. It is what nature does. It is what man must also do, sadly. The tragedies and heartaches in life are mostly (mad) man made. A thoughtful and deeply sensitive piece, cleverly written.

I love this poem. Beauty and sadness.

Those first two lines are so ubiquitous. The paradox of life. So much tragic wonder, so much terrible beauty...in everything, everywhere. Moving indeed.

An emotional poem in sad musing. Your poetic talent ought to cheer. Keep writing pal. Great metaphor used. We all have dejection in life ah. Thumbs up. So Nice to read from your pen again,

sorry, i'm not quite 'getting it'. : ( i would not relish swallowing anyone's heartache! ! ! if i did, i might get heartburn in return, for real! ! sounds like a 'downer' poem. bri : l smile! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

To not to not swallow everyone's heartache.......some time it touches like no other emotion! Beautiful poem.

(hug) Very nicely done. Yes. I think there's a way.

Beautiful write Lyn. Time change on its own, Things change on its own, Crops are sure to bloom may be in next season onwards. A field of sadness will too change. Just a matter of time. Painful write. Keep writing.

Beautiful and very emotional poem, you've managed to capture where my life is at the moment.

Still holding back! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.