Monday, June 26, 2017

A Field Of Flowers Comments

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a field of flowers speaks to me
a muted memory from the past
when summer was a child's bright toy
that seemed to fade and flee too fast
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

A map of icons we lived and loved.

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Michael Walker 26 June 2017

The dazzling colours of the flowers, the sky and the sun are most impressive. I think you have chosen a form which expresses the ideas seamlessly. Rhymed couplets, lower case letters, without traditional punctuation. Formidable.

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Barry Middleton 27 June 2017

Thanks Michael. I prefer not to use punctuation as it makes the appearance of the poem more pleasing to me.But sometimes punctuation is a must due to sentence structure.

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