a field of flowers speaks to me
a muted memory from the past
when summer was a child's bright toy
that seemed to fade and flee too fast
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The dazzling colours of the flowers, the sky and the sun are most impressive. I think you have chosen a form which expresses the ideas seamlessly. Rhymed couplets, lower case letters, without traditional punctuation. Formidable.
Thanks Michael. I prefer not to use punctuation as it makes the appearance of the poem more pleasing to me.But sometimes punctuation is a must due to sentence structure.
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