A Fictitious Day Comments

I like the spontaneity of feelings in the lines, bursting with impetuous emotions.

Ananya a fictitous day is a perfect title though i don't think the sentiment is fictitous and I love the way you weave your words. great work.

a fiction, a myth, an illusion are the theme yet there are some honest and true portrayal of sights, style is unique.

Thanks for the comment nd encouragement, wrote it when obama was elected... cud u suggest me what cud be the title other than this..i just write what i feel like i know such nuances about poetry writing...

a fictitious day is not so fictitious......... just penned well and flowing in good path... very nice to read........