Tuesday, July 17, 2007

A Fickle Mistress Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poetry...
She lures us in,
As if with her beguiling grin
She captures hearts inclined to sin
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Dee Daffodil
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Karen LaRose 22 October 2009

I don't know how to put into words all that I want to say, but I absolutely love this piece

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Eyan Desir 16 February 2009

well, written plus well express..lol great job

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James B. Earley 10 February 2009

Excellent composition! Please read 'Definition Of Poet.'

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Russel Sprouts 04 February 2009

A wonderfully true and beautiful poem Dee. A well-deserved ten for sure. Keep em coming!

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Carl Harris 04 February 2009

No often does a poet write so accurately of Erato, that muse of poetry, which so affects the soul of every poet around the world, Dee. Your fine poem is beautifully written and expressed, and written in a fairly terse style that is quite reader friendly. You have tied these related verses together quite wonderfully. Carl.

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Excellently expressed and tremendously true.

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Gurpreet S. 19 November 2008

very well written work.. im already your fan! my 10!

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Pamela Lutwyche 11 October 2008

Hey, Dee this poetry lark gets to me I wish I could stop. Must be like a drug But, I love writing what I do I love finding people, like you That makes sense and makes me smile I’m glad I found this site I was just surfing the internet One cold and dark night Then I came across this site And I must admit it has given me A good few laughs He he he

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Kris Smith 23 September 2008

Poetry is the muse that storms the mind and pulls the heart of the sentient soul never letting go 10 Chris

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Nia Riz 19 September 2008

aaah.... av ery good poem....and a good way of describing poetry. keep on wiritng as i can see that you alredy wrote 185 poems. love, Nia

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Chris O'keeffe 05 September 2008

a beautiful poem that is all too true. love it.

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O Anna Niemus 06 August 2008

a veru thought provoking poem

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Juliette Lamoureux 06 August 2008

Awesome, simply awesome.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 23 May 2008

Poetry is life poetry is thereapy, poetry............... poetry, poetry poetry evrywhere..................

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James B. Earley 03 May 2008

An extraordinary bit of wit and truth! Excellent.

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K. V. Venkataramana 08 April 2008

A well-written poem and equally beautiful.

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Roger Cornish 08 March 2008

Yeah! Your so right! She did that to me as well! Great poem. R.

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Karen LaRose 03 November 2007

I think this one has to be my favorite poem so far

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 17 September 2007

Another great poem! Dee this poem showed alot of thought and actually contained so much more then I expected...Kool title and much truth lies within this gem of a poem! Thank U for writing this piece........... =Shelley=

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Howard Johnson 17 September 2007

Intrigue-ing title Dee, With as many comments this write attracted, I did not know if I could put anything down that is not already mentioned, I do like the style, , truth and humor mixed with reality, , , And a 'most excellent write'

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