Monday, May 3, 2010

A Fickle Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

Move on as fast as you can
He doesn't love you, he doesn't need you,
He is a man with a fickle heart.
He will never know how much he's hurt you—
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Sylva Portoian 17 November 2011

Finny, You can be adviser Beside being poet Young and elegant words Never can decay... Sylva-MD-Poetry

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Pranab K Chakraborty 03 May 2010

Don’t lash out, don’t fall down He does not deserve you, he has a fickle heart Why do you care so much! Let him move on the whole globe, you are a refined soul if he comes again give him a bit more but without any expectation of getting return. Making of the poem is good. Repetition of the quoted lines are acting as the slogans of the deceived age and youth. Thank you, write more Apoet Bangla.

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