A Few Simple Gestures Comments

A very nice poem to read. I really love your way of expressing love in the simplest of ways. They are the ones that matters the most. Enjoyed.

Good poem, but nothing too new, and it falls apart in the last two verses

Lovely poem. Love and emotions well expressed.

Good gestures! Ours, the lazy ones' lives, will be made a little more difficult if our better halves get an access to your poem. However, a very nice poem, and I do appreciate your good meaning gestures...

Washing dishes in the sink Fetching books for her to read Then with a cup of coffee to walk in Is taking Feminism a trifle too far In this role reversal I do see A big global conspiracy And some day you may find It be our job to bear babies fine While they swish their hips and shine And order us about as now husbands we do...... I meant this in good humour and consider both man and woman equal in everything. I do invite everyone to my page for your esteemed comments.

Brilliant work Bradley!

Incredible, warm, and touching; I could just imagine and feel the comfort and peace you would bring! Wonderful; thank you!

This is simply wonderful. A responsible act by a responsible man. Great job

Good, somewhat infantile.

Aww you'd get sick though. From the weather. Would she then be able to take care of you in turn?

very emotional poem.....

the trick of happy life! Bradley! You must be a happy man! You don't go out to play golf? You don't watch the sports channel day and night? very strange, , but your poem is very cute, but I don't like my young to do it everyday, may be once in a while!

This poem is so sweet and full of love. I love it.

An absolute gem! I loved the lyrical flow of your poem! Great choice of words, and the subject matter was tender and sweet! Beautiful job! Anna

Bradley Bradley Bradley WOW This poem SHINES I love it! ! ! 10++++

I liked this, Explained well and not too lengthy

aunthentic feelings, warm and timeless.i love the reality of you gestures.

Expressed straight from the heart- and undoubtedly makes one teary eyed. you know, somehow i relate to your feelings and your poems. No wonder you understood my poem well too, because only the hearts living those situations could understand. Loved your poem and its dedication- rated 10 buddy :)

no stains no stains; you want her to remain only in shines...you seem to be a perfect life partner...now go to your mail box and open it up...a lot of inviting mails could be waiting you there... good write...pleasing to read...10