Friday, February 22, 2013

A Few Seconds Comments

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It was a scene, I remember well
As we wait in school, for the bell
You sat with friends in the hallway
Talking and giggling all the way
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Susan Villamil 10 November 2016

Thank you for sharing this wonderful memories you have, you were given A Few Seconds to meet her and be part of your youthful life. Very well created

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 03 October 2013

Feelings of a few moments so well expressed...lovely!

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Heather Wilkins 18 June 2013

pleasant memories are a lasting thing. A few seconds between you and me will last forever in my memory. nice thought

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Zubiya Surti 18 March 2013

your poems are just too good, sir.keep writing

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