A Few Perceptions Comments

All these perceptions are outstanding, i must admit, slightly disagreeing with ValsaJi and Om Chawla Ji. forgive. they have limited their attention to their choice, whereas art and literature deserve a full attention from head to toe, for a real, honest, sensible worth measuring; if we can call so. well, to me, this poem as a whole is inspiring, worthy pondering, and sure, might lead the reader to engage himself/herself more in exploring within the SELF. wonderful. cute. crispy too. a kind of an instant witty feeling got translated into varied instances of perceptions, we often forgot to register within.

Valsa has chosen not to comment on the second perception, atheistic in substance I particularly like the line 'With a face He Himself has never seen'. Enjoyed reading all the three. Nice write

The first and the last are outstanding perceptions! Closed shop seems to suggest the notion that waiting for something is better than getting it! When we sleep, we are not aware of ourselves! Only by keeping wide awake, we will be able to fathom into ourselves and see our real self in all nakedness!