Friday, January 6, 2006

A Few Moments In Eden Comments

Rating: 4.5

Fire and smoke cleanses the soul
My spirit, Pour may spirit in a dirt glass, let me drink my way to truth
En vino veritas, I have heard it said
I want the chance to prove it either way
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Rosa Mayfair
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Michael Philips 25 January 2006

A sort of vacant brooding intensity here that is quite compelling. You've got it, Rosa.

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Gregory Gunn 15 January 2006

Dear Rosa, You go girl! This is dynamite! x Gregory x

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Charles Chaim Wax 06 January 2006

wonderful extended image giving the history of everything in a few well wrought compact lines a bit of humor also bubbling up a fine poem

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Rosa Mayfair

Rosa Mayfair

a hospital (hahaha so funny, not)
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