Friday, May 6, 2005

A Few Degrees Of Heat Comments

Rating: 4.8

A slope of rising road
gains on the pair of us -
forcing silence.
Dusty birds and drunken bees
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James Mills
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Raynette Eitel 22 June 2005

Very well done, James...but I don't know what scumbled means, either. I'm going straight to me dictionary. Raynette

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E. Nelson 18 May 2005

This is burning, unsettling surrealism...it gets right down into my gut. I don't know meterless free-verse as well as I might, but this really does what a poem should.

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Amberlee Carter 16 May 2005

well, this is quite creative...I like it!

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Laura Cummings 09 May 2005

ooo i like :) Its defo original

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