Saturday, December 15, 2007

A Feelings In Words Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am writing to let you know how I feel
I cannot describe my intense affection and emotion
Therefore, I am going to put my feelings in words.
Since the first day, I met you.
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Rommel Filoteo
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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

very well written...well penned..

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Priyanka Shetty 30 March 2008

i enjoyed reading it.... thanks for sharing.....

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Malini Kadir 26 March 2008

I may be stepping late to read your words but they still the heart with true depth of feelings....

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You need to keep writing poetry. Your talent deserves to be displayed and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Patrice James 27 December 2007

awsome work, great feeling....I wish I could express the way you do...keep penning.

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Alison Cassidy 22 December 2007

You have expressed your feelings with compassion and honesty Rommel. You are indeed privileged to have such powerful feelings - what a joy! And even if your love isn't reciprocated, remember the love itself will never die. It will lie deep within you to share with others through your poetry. love, Allie xxxx

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CU2urDream Lost 17 December 2007

The passions and desires that rule your life The passion for love, and for life The desire to make, to rule, to start To start something new, something exiting That would put back a smile in your face and the passion in your heart The power you will surrender once and again But every time you do, you become stronger Because you will retake it and will once again make your spirit shine. I love it though what can i say more, you just heat the bottom!

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Meghan - 17 December 2007

Rommel-that is beautiful! You have very deep passion and it really shows in this writing..thanks so much for sending me the message to read it..look forward to reading more, Meghan

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Hali Curtis 17 December 2007

Wow I abosoultly love that.......I wish i had such wonderful terrific poems like u! ! ur my idol! ! ! !

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 December 2007

Beautiful poem! Keep writing: -)

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Your honesty makes this piece just great. Nobody should ever hide their affection, especially when it feels right and good... I only disagree with you about one phrase - I don't think anybody's got a simple face... Our faces are the mirrors of our souls, and as we all know, our souls are often far too complicated...

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Ewigi Liebe 16 December 2007

Go for it Rommel, better to express than to keep it inside. and its nice to have that feeling I guess, being in love and beloved. :)

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