A Feeling Of Love..... Comments

Excellently penned . Rays clings to my skin Making it wet and salty like teardrops I rested my ....

Great imageries . The sun rays were hitting the leaves

Ripples! ! ! Love and dreams. Nice work.

A poem with marvellous depiction on nsture I like most. Many thanks dear Asim, keep the ball rolling.

Md. Asim Nehal is a wonderful poet of nature. His portrayals are so breath-taking. Last stanza of the poem is really a tribute to his poetic skills where he brings to fore a graphic description. The heat muted and remained Inside the shells of the desires Calmly paving way for love to blossom

Romantic write, the way you write.. it moves like a silk

Beautiful metaphor embedded poem.

Very good depiction of love in tender, soft, melodious words..Asim..musical...thans for sharing