A Feeling Never Felt Before Comments

I have read all of your posted poems thus far and believe that Sally Nesmith is a name to watch! You are GREAT!

This poem has a nice feeling. I would leave the target of your gratitude less explicit. One of the beautiful things about poetry is that in its ambiguities it IMPLIES more than it actually says. Thus poetry is a higher form of expression, saying more than mere words. If you have to literally say what you are talking about the poem is lacking. However the good news is. You didn't need to. This poem got the message across prior to 'Thank you God...' I would dropp that line.