I am alone
Flustered
Helpless
Trapped in the box
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'wish to feel that hand so soft and caring freeing me and taking me to her ever asuring world..' I thoought you could hv added the above.... Nice reading
The feeling of suffocation is offspring of loneliness. A nice and compact poem, Ayesha, but the line ' Behind the walls ' is unnecessary. Best Wishes. Naseer