Wednesday, July 9, 2008

A Feeling Comments

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I am alone
Flustered
Helpless
Trapped in the box
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Ayesha iSha
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 February 2009

The feeling of suffocation is offspring of loneliness. A nice and compact poem, Ayesha, but the line ' Behind the walls ' is unnecessary. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Dislocated Heart 11 July 2008

short but really nice. keep writing good job!

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Evolved Indian 09 July 2008

'wish to feel that hand so soft and caring freeing me and taking me to her ever asuring world..' I thoought you could hv added the above.... Nice reading

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