Sunday, November 24, 2019

A Feeling! Comments

Rating: 4.0

I woke up on a Sunday dawn,
And wandered out of the cabin holding intentions,
Of beholding lively visions.
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Navod Jayasuriya
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Akhtar Jawad 07 February 2020

A scene so nicely described, a painting of beauty.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 29 November 2019

The contrast in the final stanza is thought Provoking

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Palitha Ranatunge 27 November 2019

As always you have written a beautiful versification...

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Navod Dilhara 28 November 2019

Thank you for the admiration.

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A B Faniki 24 November 2019

I lovely piece.: -) I loved it

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Navod Dilhara 28 November 2019

Thank you! .

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Kingsley Egbukole 24 November 2019

Beautiful poem. Interesting reading....10. Thanks for sharing

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Navod Dilhara 25 November 2019

Thank you for the comment, Kingsley!

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