Monday, March 13, 2023

A Feeble Escape. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sharing a story, wearing
Invisible cloak, erasing
The name of narrator
Who's a complex orator
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Pallavi Tripathi
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Denis Mair 06 April 2023

Sometimes a narrator is veiled in the cloud of his own story. Very perceptive. Where does one go while immersing oneself in telling a story? It is a place that's not a place.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2023

I take enonormous pleasure in revisiting this beautiful poem dear Pallavi....well penned!

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Life is a story of wanderlusts. Nice poem

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2023

Pallavi, there's no escaping the fact that you're a good poetess. Enjoyed the genius of your poem.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 March 2023

Not a feeble expression indeed! Carries weight. Nice work

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Anjandev Roy 13 March 2023

Wonderful work.......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 March 2023

Brilliant write Pallavi just Brilliant

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Pallavi Tripathi 14 March 2023

Thank you so much LeeAnn! : )

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2023

A very nice poem dear Pallavi.... extremely well penned. Keep it up!

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