Thursday, August 6, 2009

A Feast For The Eyes Comments

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making me wait
for a whole year
for the first bloom
of the cluster of laburnums!
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ritty patnaik
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Ruth Walters 11 October 2009

another good poem painting a picture of beauty Ruthie

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Bob Blackwell 20 August 2009

Ritty, I was born in North Wales, nearby there is stately home called Bodnant Hall which has an archway of laburnum which stetches like a long avenue of golden yellow when in bloom. Thank you for taking me home. Bob

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Nikunj Sharma 18 August 2009

ys, that one look of admiration.........does the trick............your poem is beautiful...

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Mamta Agarwal 16 August 2009

i am as fascinated with laburnum as you Ritti. enjoyed your delight in the beauty of the flower. you might like A GOLDEN SHOWER MAMTA

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Milica Franchi De Luri 15 August 2009

It must be a magical place to be in..........nicely written, i felt like i was seeing it while i was reading the poem

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 August 2009

ohh...beautiful....flowed with the poem, even if i dont know how laburnums look!

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