Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, July 4, 2010

A Fear So Often Comments

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What makes you happy all of sudden?
When you are gripped with fear often
What will you wish to happen?
Some miracles in the night at sharp ten
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Maulin Shah 19 July 2010

It is lovely day to enjoy Father’s day is to be celebrated with joy.. it is lacuna in us....10

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2010

This is not one poem, it is two. The first 6 stanzas are incomplete and I would finish them and using the same title rewrite that first poem. The last 8 stanzas are all about music. This should be the title of this poem. This second poem is complete and is quite nice as it is. It still needs a little work but people will still enjoy it as it is. --- Greenwolfe 1962

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Chand Shikari 12 July 2010

You go for it without feeling foul It is real thing to long for and feel You have yet not tested the bitter pill..yes there is fear in mind.....10

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