Thursday, June 25, 2009

A Fear Comments

Rating: 3.0

it causes that the heart
is beating more quickly
at the rhythm familiar to oneself
you are shaking and are sweating
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Afzal Shauq 31 July 2009

you are afraid and are shivering you are freezing to the spot it is only waiting for it is goggling large eyes is clenching the throat is growing the selection of words and the way of expression is perfect and the rhythmic way of writing shows that, you know the baseics of poetry to make.. i enjoyedit and let me say, you are really a good poem with sweet andmeaninful thought...appreciate you..

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Fluent, beautiful, well penned.10.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 June 2009

Very good poem. With pleasure I am giving 10 v. :)

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