Friday, August 2, 2019

A Favored Couple Comments

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Why do you take it as a human caricature?
May be a favored person of the ancient nature,
At least he isn't ancient, he may be too old,
Not a diamond of bones, a flush of soft gold,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2019

To maintain deep love and care despite old age is a blessing. To feel and see.the loveliness and beauty in our beloved every single day will make life wonderful and heavenly. I am deeply touched by a lovely couple whose relationship keeps going stronger through the years. A beautiful and insightful poem with a meaningful message to humanity on marriage.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2019

The silk above a beautiful face offered this grace, The deep seas below forehead provided the pearls, The old woman in love is better than teen aged girls. ITS OKAY FOR OLDIES TO SAY Young guys still lurk for young gals even today as you did in your youthful days have you forgotten so quickly I am looking still

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2019

CONGRATULATIONS SIR JA UR NOW 316/500 I AM STILL WAITING SINCE NANO AGES

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Jane Campion 02 August 2019

To live love in old age is to outlast all. Great insights in this poem.

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