Thursday, May 9, 2013

A Father's Love For A Teenage Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who gave that almighty yell?
Like a giant with a rotten toothache
'What-in-Lucifers name' this sour taste?
'What in damnations name' that awful smell?
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Mark Heathcote
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Gajanan Mishra 09 May 2013

very fine child's heart, I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 09 May 2013

What a strange perspective, but I've never really had a father or had a son so I guess somethings are above my imagining. Good Poem.

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