a dougter so young
just aventuring and wondering
but a fathers love
so protective and controling
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*sniff* This poem actually makes me wish to rekindle the bond me and my dad had.
you touched my heart dear..father's love is so unique, so special, so protective...am glad you ve experienced such love in ample..it will take you long...excellent expressions! 10+
nice one.......father's love is indeed strong............ beautiful work........ ;) you need to check the spellings again..........lots of typos in here...
I like that a lot. It's so personal, like you trust the world with your heart. very beautiful