Sunday, June 28, 2009

A Fathers Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

a dougter so young
just aventuring and wondering
but a fathers love
so protective and controling
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dani fries
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A Lifetime Of Fame 28 December 2011

I like that a lot. It's so personal, like you trust the world with your heart. very beautiful

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Sans Serif 02 September 2009

*sniff* This poem actually makes me wish to rekindle the bond me and my dad had.

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

you touched my heart dear..father's love is so unique, so special, so protective...am glad you ve experienced such love in ample..it will take you long...excellent expressions! 10+

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Shekhar Joshi 07 July 2009

nice one.......father's love is indeed strong............ beautiful work........ ;) you need to check the spellings again..........lots of typos in here...

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