Tuesday, December 2, 2008

A Fathers Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

So I sat on my bed
And the thoughts flooded my head
I wondered what I did wrong
That the boy I loved would not love me back....
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Melissa Desiree Reddy
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a lovely piece from the heart...dad's are daughters darlings

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Ency Bearis 03 December 2008

great write deeply from your emotion well expressed..a great comfort from loving Dad..well penned..A10 Ency Bearis

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Jerry Hughes 03 December 2008

Mel, I'm sure you dad appreciated the senitments of this well written poem. Well done, Jerry

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Scott Austin 03 December 2008

Your heart felt feelings of love for your father is expressed in your words, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

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Melissa Desiree Reddy

Melissa Desiree Reddy

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