Saturday, February 26, 2022

A Father's Gait Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's not easy being a father
You suck this blood and bone marrow every day
Naturally, that's how it is
But I wonder why instead of reducing the load it looks like it's overloaded
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Rayhani azhari Rayhani 15 October 2024

Her steps reflect wisdom, experience, and strength, and are a symbol of protection and guidance for her children. Through this depiction, the poem highlights the deep relationship between father and son, and how the father's presence and walk provide a sense of security and inspiration.

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hafsah hafsah 11 June 2024

This story tells that it is not easy to be a father. There are many burdens to bear, being a father does not only provide material things but also attitude to his family

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This poem is very good and very interesting, the word and the sentences is beautiful. This poem teaches us to love our fathers, because being a father is not easy and they also experience fatherhood for the first time.

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is very heartfelt, because it tells how it feels to live without a father, and the sacrifice of a father.

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lovely aprilia lovely 11 June 2024

This poem has a deep meaning, how the father's struggle is so great for his child, how it feels to live without a father.

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This poem is very good, the meaning in it is very touching, telling how a struggle that must be given by a father for his children.

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the poem 'A Father's Gait' the meaning in this poem is how difficult it is to be a father, and the struggles that must be given, as well as teaching how difficult it is to live without a father.

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Kiki Ivanka 14 June 2023

Father's love sometimes will not be seen, because indeed he is not good at showing it.

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Your poetry is very beautiful and meaningful

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