A Father Without His Son Comments

the sun has set for the final time his son would never rise a picture hanging on the wall is engraved in his gloomy eyes….bereaving over the loss of the dearest sun brooding over his smiles……. great Poem full of Emotion my dear Poet. thank u. tony

Of a plight! ! And, with the echoes of life. Thanks for sharing.

A very beautiful poem......every line in this poem is just full of emotions.....wisely narrated....thank you for sharing and for comments also :)

the memories of his only son he holds them real tight in the corner of a lonesome room a father weeps tonight........its so poignant a story, beautifully narrated, makes you weep and thanks god for your parents and kin.......lovely write.........

There is nothing more heart breaking than father loosing his only son. Beautiful poem written with deepest emotions.

A Beautiful write from the heart. Thank you for your comment on mine.

Nothing in this universe can compensate his ruptured wounded heart.... a very poignant touchy write. My sympathy with that ill fated father

Swimming in the sea of sadness yet surging with significant.Well done my friend.

very emotional and touchy poem this is Kanav.............yes its really painful plight to be in this situation..........u have penned every line very beautifully, the images run in front of the eyes

Hello Kanav what a beautiful poem of sadness and loss.It touches the heart and brings a tear to the eye Beautifully written and a great read I give it a ten

A very sad and moving write..The pain which a father feels for his lost son, you have penned it so well that each words are painfully poured out. Touching indeed. A Beautiful write Kanav. Loved reading it. I am just wondering, how come I missed this poem...

The unmitigated sorrow of this poem is almost too much to bear... extraordinarily genuine in its portrayal of grief… if sadness and despair was your aim… then you have most certainly achieved your goal… in spades… well written, Sir!

what a beautiful poem, so sad yet so beautiful, thanx for sharing it with meand everyone else, keep up the great work

A lovely write, you give so much in your every word

The sadness increases as we read the poem and the last two lines give the concluding pang of sadness.

a picture hanging on the wall is engraved in his gloomy eyes beautiful lines!

Sad and extremely moving. One must go on.. You presented this lamentation extremely well

Very sad and touching indeed.....really touched my heart...........Kanav........feelings well portrayed.........

in the corner of a lonesome room a father weeps tonight..... touchyyy!

I weep for much the same reasons, my friend. Peace to your soul.