A Father's Love Comments

Dear Charles, What a delicious sense of humour emanating from the page. Had me laughing out loud all the way. Stupendous offering. Shall definitely read some more of yours. Gregory

I think alot of dads would've just put him in the depends and said heck with his doctor. That does say alot about him as a father. I'm finding your work very interesting......each one like a little mini-story. Sincerely, mary

I absolutely liked this poem and it will stick in my mind! ! .............willow

Charles, Your use of the narrative is brilliant and its divisions seem to make the flow so natural. I really think this is brilliant. You seem to be drawing up characters and projecting situations onto them in order to make a point. It is a facinating device and makes your work such facinating reading: something to return to. With great respect Denis Joe

a unique and interesting piece...i enjoyed this!

I love it. Your words are beautifully staged, and I enjoy reading your work...thanks for reading mine.. louise

LOL Lovely!