A Father's Lamentation Comments

I will never forget what my father did to us..He did everything so we will not go hungry and uneducated. A great tribute indeed

Beautiful way to express a father's lamentation.

a great and befitting homage to the institution of father.... very well penned and touching....the end like in this poem is sad and remains with the heart as a tinge great poetry sir cheers

Deign in goodness not in wealth But strong in heritage..... not in wealth but in heritage that is what I have got.. what an inspirational poem and to be understood by us all...lovely write...10 read mine the sun.....sun and son..... papa douknow and papa u too

A great poem, Noel. Really great. As a father I can feel the sadness to the core of my heart. An everlasting piece of poetry my friend...10. Regards Naseer

this is a great, moving one indeed! ! ! great tribute to all the loving fathers! ! ! i wish i can turn out to be a great father one day! ! ! this is a nice write indeed 10+++ with lots of love shan

You've offered a wonderful and meaningful poem about fathers in diff. angels! 10

a fitting tribute to all the great fathers in the world. Happy Father's Day!

all stanzas describes father as the best and the very best..a loving father is always the loving husband..a perfect father is always a perfect husband...regardless of anything, a fatherly love is a wife's pride...i like this very much...hope even if those who are not still a father, hope they could understand what's the rule of a very best father..naizz

the take hoem message of this is one that i agree with. plus the poetry is of the highest standard.. nice

really excellent poem. have told the story that will be a lesson for generations.nice words too.congrats voted10 surya

excellent beautiful writing, meaningful and with beautiful presentation and rhymes..10+++++++++++

a fathers lamentation...... a master piece of work...........

very nice indeed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !