Friday, July 20, 2007

A Father's Advice! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.8

You are the part of my body and soul,
You are the one who will surely achieve his goal,
So, for you here are some pieces of advice,
For, you may lead a life that is simple and nice.
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Farah sherazi
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Faraz Ahmed Memon 03 September 2008

good piece of work....nice thoughts........

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 August 2008

I gave this a 9 which is my normal high score because this is a passing of philosophy. All such writing will receive a recommended grade from me unless it is silly in content. This was wise and focused as well. I found it to be advice that is likely to be followed because it had a central theme.....Allah. GW62

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adil Khan 11 October 2007

what a lovely and devinely poem.nice work: -)

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June30 Tara 20 July 2007

What a beautiful world would this be, if we all listen to your advice and be kind, humble and gentle. Nice write.

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