A Father's Advice Comments

Wise words indeed, in a well written poem.

Wisdom is the beauty of this poem. Great write, Elbert.

Sounds a lot like Rudyard Kipling’s ‘If’. For some motherly advise read my ‘Bloom of Youth’. Adeline

Elbert, Wisdom is a gift of time, one we need to share! Thanks for sharing, Darlene

this is a beautiful poem and you speak with wisdom. I give you a 10++.

ELBERT I HAVE TOLD YOU ONCE AND IM GOING TO SAY IT AGAIN. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND I MAY BE TOO SOFT BUT AGAIN IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES

This speaks with wisdom…thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Scott