Saturday, September 5, 2009

A Father I Don'T Know Comments

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I have a father whom I do not know.
He left our family many years ago.
I often wonder why he went away.
Oh, how my life has changed since that dark day!
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Lone Dog
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Indira Renganathan 04 November 2009

Very pitiable...life sometimes meet odd characters and events...we should only be brave to face the sequences and subsequences...well written10

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Alex Gomez 08 October 2009

Oddly enough, I recently made a poem utilizing this exact structure. Very flowing and telling of a personal situation that is unfortunately familiar to many. Excellent work.

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