A Fate Comments

A poem oozing out optimism and positive attitude for life. Such reassurances are necessary for invigorating ourselves and our Selves.

Very beautiful and very well written. Delightful. I am admiring such writing :))

'fate'........ Fate is something strange indeed.. don't know what is written in my fate. this is good, last few lines kinda inspirational too.. kinda of a had a soothing like.. very free flowing lines, nice to read..10 with lots of loves shan

Between dusk and dawn, and between day and night, the deteriorating moon and the youthful sun collides, to mock up the loss of anger, anxiety, sorrow, joy, jubilance, which were left over by human when they'e not on their feets.

Its one of those days when one gets to wake up a little early and remain in bed, till the world wakes up.. its about the time for the world to wake up, and you are awake before it. beautiful, masterful work. hats off.10/10 and my vote too!

Beautifully written. There will certainly be a tomorrow when weakness and sadness leave you and fill you with hope. Voted 10.