Sunday, March 30, 2008

A Far-Off Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

You should have seen this house in its day
It was warm and cozy and held
A family quite a few years ago where
A mom, dad and two kids dwelled.
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Marilyn Lott
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Sandra Fowler 24 August 2009

You have achieved the very essence of nostalgia in this one. Your title lingers in the mind like a beautiful, old song. Love, SandraX

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Omar Ali Sabar 22 August 2008

reality strikes hard with this one.. good stuff

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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